Saturday, August 8, 2009

MOTHERLY MOMENTS


SHE YELLED, SHE CRIED
MAY BE I WAS THE REASON
FOR HER SUFFERING THAT WHOLE SEASON

GIVING BIRTH TO A BABY
SHE MATURED AS A LADY
FEEDING HER COLD AND TIGHT
HER ANGONY TURNED INTO DELIGHT

THOSE PRECIOUS MOMENTS WERE SHORT
HOPE THESE EVERLASTING MEMORIES ARE NEVER LOST
IF I WAS THAT BABY
THANKYOU GOD FOR THIS WONDERFUL LADY...

3 comments:

Subu @ Tilak said...

This is poem is amazing da vivek..i really really liked it...this poem is so diff from the rest of them...and you have used your words very carefully and at the right place. I think now youve got a hold over you thoughts and translating them into words in a simple but effective manner. Good going.

Vivek Ramasamy said...

thanks a lot....i wrote it in train at11.30pm....didnt hav pen and paper......but managed to frame it wit mobile....will def upload more poems.....hope u r lookin fwd to them.....cheers to u...........

Padmini said...

Love this... Simple and yet meaniful.. :)